I sat at the window sill
A Tea cup in my hand
Taking in the sweet fragrance of my wet Land
Besides the heavy rain drops was an undercurrent of silence in the air
Not a single voice nor a fidgety creature
Man is a helpless plaything at the mercy of nature
At that point a thought entered my mind
There would be farmers and today their eyes would not have a shine
There would be a wet child who could not afford to dine
A sweet young couple could be having the best of their time
An unfortunate urchin hoping to atleast get a dime
A lonely old man just going through the grind
His days are numbered he wouldn’t mind
There would be a young boy all raring to go
For with the morning Sun he needs new ideas to sow
Even he wants to apprecite the wet grass and the weed
But he cant sit back, hes got a family to feed
He wants to feel the blades of grass and the dew
He himself doesn’t know how his youth just flew
There would be a policeman keeping vigil to his own soul
For fighting this system has always been his only goal
He’s heard those hushed whispers in the corridors of power
Tonight he has to ensure shelter for all who will cower
He would see a Businessman, a virtual paragon of ingenuity
Seeking shelter in a slum, disasters don’t follow any disparity
A Damsel would be singing along with the rain pellets
Showing off to her friends her new bracelets
Proud to be an earning girl and independent
Hoping the next monsoon she bears a pendant
She likes this guy for he is honest about his sleaziness
Perhaps he could be the factor to bring her the happiness
There would be youngsters out on the streets
Helping out the homeless not for any credits
In this deluge they will dare
For people with a passion always care
There would be the confident young man
Walking through the deluge
Not thinking of it to be anything huge
He’s seen the Businessman
And also the policeman
He’s seen the youngsters help the old man
And thinks of the passers-by to be one of his clan
The plight of his fellow men brings to his eye a tear
He is not the one ashamed to acknowledge his fear
He’s ready to lend a helping hand
But does not have time to just wait and stand
He wont digress in his path which is long
Still he makes it a point to enjoy the song
He wants to reach quickly to his destination
For he knows he owes his vision a realization
Each of this kind knows the other exists
Perhaps thats the reason they all co-exist
Taking in the sweet fragrance of my wet land
I feel life is absolutely beautiful and grand
To strike the right chords it does take a while
The world belongs to the one who can walk through a disaster and smile
adi
10 comments:
wowo thts somethin!!!! good job dude!!!
welcome to the club of rhyme,
your sounds s sweet as the cuckoo chime
try n b short is my advice,
keep workin on a narrow premise
we need to work on the rhyming schemes
to fulfill our poetic dreams...
now i guess even chai times
we will now talk in rhymes
as they Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die tomorrow. fantastic work keep it up and yes i agree with khamir as well keep it short :)
kudos...
clap clap clap....
and a big bow..
nice effort man...
keep growing!!!!
Rhyme is appreciated but not mandatory. U have a writer in u so don't restrict urself to the rhyme. Even without it u can tell a vivid lively tale. This btw was a good attempt. Almost felt the raindrops on my head...
Hey Adi...
A beautiful poem dude...
Keep writing!
Cheers!
Harshal
hey khandu.. seeing the sheer lenght of this... its gonna take.. a month to finish for me.. til than... this is my comment..
NEXT TIME... A TURNCATED VERSION..
u can hav version releasing everyday!!!
heyy khandekar....nice one dude...really touching n real...
keep it up !!!
Gr888 work adi. keep it up
"Kabhi Hilton Kabhi Taj
Kabhi Hilton Kabhi Taj...
Kuch hee salon mein mai karunga RAJ...."
meee too tryin :P
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